I have been working on a commentary on the Psalms. I have decided to compile some helpful links that I discovered during my research. It includes a mix of exegetical and sermonic links. Here is what I have for Psalm 24 (in no particular order). Feel free to mention any that you find helpful in the comments section.
Spokane Bible Church: http://www.spokanebiblechurch.com/books/psalm-24
Literary analysis of Psalm 24: http://psalmsstudy.com/psalms-literary-analysis-by-chapter/literary-analysis-psalm-24-mount-adonai
Analysis by C. J. Labuschagne: https://www.labuschagne.nl/ps024.pdf William Barrick’s notes: https://drbarrick.org/files/studynotes/Psalms/Ps_024.pdf
Lee Irons on Standing with the Lord (Ps 24:4): https://zondervanacademic.com/blog/standing-with-the-lord-ps-244